i mean
it was okay. it got repetitive and the whole poetry thing got to be a little pretentious. I loved the animation part, that whole part with the blurry bubbles over video footage. If it was all more like that I would have given this a 9 or 10. i understand you weren't going for what i'm asking for, i'm just saying i felt the strong points of it were in those animation bits, not in the poetry/writing